Alright! I feel like that progressed a little fast. I might have wanted to know a bit more about the opponents Tanya faced while training. That said, that detail in itself is amazing. Obviously Rachel is the big thing Tanya has to overcome but I didn't really feel like Tanya struggled or faced adversity at all. It's not a criticism of the story, I'm just worried about this particular showdown with Rachel.

In particular the variety of opponents Tanya fought were very interesting. It's fun to speculate on who exactly she fought and how far Tanya went to win. But there was never a struggle, I guess. Tanya had the extra energy to take care of Griffin, too. The relationship between Griffin and Tanya is actually pretty wholesome and very cute considering Tanya's addiction.

The addictive element is a fun thing, too. Is losing and continuing to fight from the bottom more enticing than winning when Griffin is on the line. Tanya hasn't really been faced with losing yet with the stakes this high yet. I hope she can win but it's really tense right now. Anyway, I'm really enjoying the story! Looking forward to the showdown!!